Tag: character

Nice to meet you…

September 6, 2014     scarlettfinn     Blog post

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What’s the most important part of any fiction novel? The genre? Location? Style? Maybe the premise? Not in my opinion. In my opinion, the most important part of every fiction novel is: the characters.
If we care about the characters, if we connect with them, then the other aspects merely compliment and enhance these people who we are on a journey with.
From an authors point of view, we have to be willing to spend an awful lot of time with these people, months, sometimes years, getting to know them. While we work with them, they are our best friends, our lovers, and our allies. They are our colleagues and they are our family. They are us and we are them.
So, let’s start with nothing. Try to recall how you feel before you open a book, when you’ve maybe read the blurb but really don’t know anything about who is in the book or what they’re going to go through, when you’re completely clueless. Then think about your last book hangover, when you really didn’t want to close the book because then you knew it was going to be over. When you didn’t want to put it down. When you cared so much about these characters that you couldn’t get them out of your head for days and lay awake at night thinking about them. Quite a transition, isn’t it?
We rarely fixate on the location or even the specific storyline of a book for too long. The characters are what linger with us. As humans, the psychic connection is crucial. In real life, there’s not always a physical reason for you to care for someone, but we still do care about them.
Developing this kind of connection between reader and character is very important in ensuring the most satisfying reading experience.
So, how do we create a character? For the most part physical attributes aren’t really very important, they are window dressing. Sometimes a vision of a character will be what first appears, but the look of a character isn’t what makes them complete. We don’t connect because we know someone is six foot tall and has blue eyes.
To write a character that readers can connect with you have to understand the essence of them. You have to be able to live in their head and understand their motivations, their actions, and their mannerisms etc. Why do they use certain words? What are their habits and ambitions? It’s not enough to keep a bio, to have a list of facts about upbringing and environment. We can’t simply list their CV, likes and dislikes, and think that a collection of facts will bring about a relationship between reader and character.
All of us are flawed and so characters have to be flawed too. They are not perfect. They are not (depending on the genre) omnipotent and can’t necessarily read the mind of a person who may be hurting, or be able to see danger coming from around the corner. Characters have to be thrown off-guard and out of their comfort zone, when we as readers understand that they are mentally or emotionally struggling but they battle on then we start to root for them.
But it starts with a link. The writer has to be linked to the character, we have to be able to live in their head and have them inhabit ours. Imagining how they would react in even the most mundane of circumstances helps with that, talking to them, writing scenes that will never make the book, all of these things help to develop a trust and understanding between character and reader, because it’s only when the author cares about the character that the reader will too.
This goes for the villains too. Care doesn’t have to be tender. You have to understand the motivations, and the history, of your antagonist as well as you do for the protagonist, it gives the relationship between those characters balance.
The writer, and the reader, should always remember that these characters are only given life when they are experienced and remembered. They can only feel if you feel. You are their heartbeat and their soul inhabits yours. Take a piece of your favourite characters with you wherever they go – they’ll appreciate the adventure.

Good luck on your adventures,

xSx

Crazy!

August 2, 2014     scarlettfinn     Blog post

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It’s a declaration, not an apology. But it suddenly hit me yesterday evening as I was driving: I am batsh*t crazy!
We all have our quirks. At least, I think we do. But when I was driving along thinking about a particularly interesting plot idea my son spoke. Which is fine, but I have a tendency to burst into song when he does that.
Now the boy laughs, I’m just being silly, but I realised while looking at the faces of other drivers, no one else was laughing their head off and singing songs from Annie. He used the word “tomorrow” that was enough for me. I also do Cats, West Side Story, Grease… but it’s not just show tunes, oh no. I can turn lots of words from normal conversation into song. I do seventies disco, eighties rock & new romantics. I do nineties pop and dance. I do indie, alternative, Beatles, Elvis, Queen… just about anything :p When Britney is relevant I crank up the air con, I put on quite a show, lol!
So this got me thinking, is this normal behaviour? No, probably not, though I do it for the laugh most of the time, I do have other quirks.
I don’t watch a lot of TV but whenever I do I have to have the subtitles on, TV show, DVD, whatever, I have to read it. To the point that when I go to the movies and there are no subtitles I’m a little perturbed and unsure exactly what I’m supposed to “do” with myself. Others hate it, but I have to have subtitles (I should point out here that there is nothing wrong with my hearing… my singing on the other hand… :P)
I also have a tendency to narrate hypotheticals, so having a conversation with me can take a while :p I’ve probably said enough now, so I won’t list more of my “quirks”.
So I wonder, are others like this? Or do others wake up, shower, brush their teeth, dress, go to work, then come back and eat dinner just to go to bed. Or do other people say, “Let’s go this way”, just to see what happens?
It’s bad enough that most of my time is occupied making up people and scenarios, and I know that us “creative” types are typically nuts, which leads me to the question: does being certifiably insane make me a better writer? It doesn’t really matter, I suppose, but I have to feel for my child.
What other parent would be over the moon to hear their child talking to their computer? The thing he plays with most is the giant, empty cardboard box in the middle of this room – he plays both sides of the finale showdown. Typically there’s no love interest, but he’s young, he’ll get there :p
Do other parents beam with pride when their baby asks for subtitles on the TV so he can “read along”? Bedtime stories often lead to epic sagas involving sub-plots and secondary characters… oh my poor angel baby!
I take solace because I’ve heard that crazy people don’t actually know they’re crazy, so that means I can’t be, right? Though that in itself does beg the question… just what did I think I was before last night? :p

Good luck on your adventures,

xSx

Me, Myself and Who?

July 24, 2014     scarlettfinn     Blog post

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So the next Explicit novel, have you heard? Yes, there’s a sequel.
At this stage in the process the story is there. The novel has a beginning, it has a middle, and it has an end… which I always find helps :p
The trouble comes now… writing is a solitary pursuit. Publishing is not.
I read and I edit, but I find myself wondering things: Is the novel too long? Is there too much musing? Is there enough sex? Should the character say this or that? Specifically, there are two things that I am having trouble deciding and this is where the solitary frustration comes in.
Rushe and Flick’s relationship was largely well-received, as much to my surprise as anyone’s, but the sequel… oh I wish I could tell you!
The pressure is greater and the stakes are higher. Writing for myself was easy, I could write whatever I wanted and if I decided that I didn’t like it I could change it to suit myself.
But I’m not just writing for me anymore. Publishing has opened up an audience for my characters and it’s becoming increasingly clear that it’s impossible to please everyone. I get so many opinions and so many of them conflict that when I come to make decisions I pause, I hesitate, and suddenly I don’t know what I’m doing anymore.
It’s tough, that’s all I’m saying. There is literally no one else on the face of the planet that knows the story of the next Explicit novel. As exciting as it is to write there’s immense pressure. I’m great at keeping secrets but this one wants to get out. I want to know if what I am doing is right, but how can I know that?
I never realised it was like this. I love my characters and my writing but I’m scared that when I bare my soul it won’t be enough!
I have to be more like Rushe. He has to be in me somewhere. I can imagine aloof, but I fail to achieve it.
The fear, the uncertainty, at least it shows I care. I want you to enjoy my characters. I don’t want to let them down. You are my audience and I stand here, alone and naked, on this is the stage, how do I build a bridge between us?
But through all of this I’ve learned two important things: A) it doesn’t get any easier, and B) the love for it doesn’t go away.
When all else fails I keep writing because funnily enough, it’s the only thing in the world that makes any sense to me.

Good luck on your adventures,

xSx

Do you promise not to tell?

Do you promise not to tell?

  It’s crap. It’s all a big steaming pile of garbage. Yes, I’m going slightly mad. I couldn’t sleep last night. I tossed and I turned picking it all apart and trying to put it together again. The trouble is that when you start to force it the whole thing becomes contrived and it ends […]

July 22, 2014
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Catch the wind.

Catch the wind.

    On a completely unrelated issue I have to make a declaration first: I love my iPhone, I hate my charger. Last week on the night before I left to go away my phone charger fried, which wouldn’t have been a problem if it hadn’t had the new lightning connection. Needless to say after […]

July 17, 2014
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And now for something comple..

And now for something completely different…

It’s out, Explicit Instruction is now available on Amazon. Please buy it and review it if you like. It’s published, I’ve told everyone I know, and I’ve conveyed that message through all of my online channels. Now that is out the way there’s only one question left to answer. What’s next? I’m in that limbo […]

June 26, 2014
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